I found your face really close to the camera, It was just to close for me for the standard shot. It was also quite shaking, though it did suit the question/informal style of the video. Other then that I enjoyed it.

http://www.youtube.com/user/Pruechelan?feature=mhee#p/u/12/f2NkLJN-gRE

I loved your content, particularly the Katherine Tate quote. If you angled yourself so that your face was towards the window with the camera in between you and the window, the light hitting the lense wouldn’y obscure your face so much Also, don’t be afraid to look directly at the camera. You’ve got some really great things to say.

My most recent vlog isn’t the most fascinating but it’s pretty short.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=we5zgTJpQhM&context=C30a56b0ADOEgsToPDskIk-mNwQJXoxQRveVBgj6mb

Thanks for those tips! And I actually really liked your vlog. It was honest and nice and it was really personal and that seemed like what you wanted to give to your audience and I felt that. Honestly, if there’s one criticism I’d say shut the door. The door was a little bit distracting, but I liked it! :]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RsEdG2vNH8c&feature=g-u-u&context=G2705da7FUAAAAAAALAA

I posted a comment, via my second channel. I really liked it. I think it’s gonna be a good movie. I can’t wait to see it. Umm, it did have kind of an awkward cutout, which once you realized you were just trimming was fine, but for a second there, it was just kind of nargly.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=f-JuzXc9LQ8&feature=colike

yeah, unfortunately getting that light right is tricky business and it’s natural lighting so sometimes it can just wash me out.

Now, your video came out sounding really strong. I liked what you talked about but your voice tone, that anger, might not have been the best way to relay the message. Because you did go in to that magazine only to get the poster, so it would have been a little bit easier to handle if you had been a little bit more lighthearted or surprised by it. Because while those magazines have dumb articles like that some people find them interesting and think there was definitely a risky move to talk so openly with that tone? I don’t know if that makes much sense, but I hope it does.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3C3NapBPLkw

It was interesting, the audio got a little silent at times which seemed to be distracting more than anything but other than that, it’s pretty good.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8SYAjnO197Q&feature=g-upl&context=G298a598AUAAAAAAAAAA

That was adorable!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bjItH23OXOo

Ok I’ll criticize this as someone who has been working on film since i was about 15.
The audio is all over the place I can’t understand anyone at all, the cuts need to be quicker. Don’t take offense to this but this entire video smells of lack of preparation on everyones part. I don’t know the story on this, i’m so confused. I kinda gave up after about 5 minutes. The actors need to have there lines down and memorized, and if they don’t then I wouldn’t even bother.

That being said good job for a first try.

http://youtu.be/Ld9yKG-xciA

A very good video nina, it was interesting, but you need to get yourself a editing software even if it is movie maker and edit the volume of your voice and jump cut your videos because if you just talk people loose interest even if it is the most interesting video on the planet.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N29Xb3Wz_f0

Well done, Chloe.

A few technical notes:
- when you were inside at the start I couldn’t see you very well, perhaps consider changing camera settings or turning on more lights;
- at least one time while you were outside the wind made it difficult to hear you, not sure what to do about this other than purchase a microphone or film when/where it’s less windy; and finally
- if you can afford to, consider investing a camera which can film in 16:9 aspect ratio (otherwise try to learn how to manually control your camera to get the best out of it).

A few thoughts on the content:
- you spoke very well and had some very original, interesting ideas which came across strongly in the video;
- a few times I felt like you might have mumbled or stumbled on a word or two (no-one’s perfect or can speak perfectly every take/video); remember to enunciate and think about/write down what you going to say before you say it, also try rehearsing and doing additional takes;
- I might have liked to hear a bit more of what was going on around you, but make your own style and stick to it;
- you should be very proud of yourself for openly expressing your views while at the same time respecting/acknowledging other’s – that is a very, VERY good quality to have!

Again, well done.

My video for review:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aYu31Yml0gk
(alternatively you can pick one from my channel, just let me know which one you’re watching)

P.S. I have people who are interested or learning about physiology watching my videos, I would be VERY interested to hear what someone without this background thinks and specifically what they did and didn’t understand.

Great video! One thing you could improve on would be to have some more cuts so that there isn’t as much pausing and silence. You have a very good camera presence though and good subjects to talk about and I enjoyed the video a lot. Cutting out the silence would help a ton though.

Here’s my video.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N2bgSJSEPdw

I thought your video was really well done! I loved the fact that it incorporated the two parts, one kinda like a short film, and one vlogging. Also, I really like your presence in front of the camera, it’s really interesting to watch. The title was fantastic, also. The only thing I would say is there was a lot of silence at the beginning. It would’ve been nice for the voice over or even the music to continue while you were doing stuff. But still, great job! I subscribed. :3

My video: http://youtu.be/O9RGEQ644eo

First off, I love the title. I too am an interrobang enthusiast. I think you should put “interrobang hipster” on your business cards.
Overall, an enjoyable vlog, but you had a couple of somewhat awkward silences and word-trips that could be easily jump-cutted out. And on that note, I think you were a little too focused on doing the whole jump-cut-all-around-the-screen thing, which distracted somewhat from your content and structure.
Also, PUPPPPPYYYYY. He’s adorable.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JSaKOgpwMnA

Okay so as for enthusiasm and lighting and stuff that was all good. The technical aspects were really good. The content felt a little contradictory, because you say that you are uncomfortable with fangirling and yet you stopped to take footage of the TFiOS van. I also have said this previously to other people so please don’t think it’s just me, but you might want to think about toning down on the like forceful and bluntness of that opinion that fangirling is an inherently bad thing. But I liked the video, i just consider myself a fangirl and I don’t think I would ever bow down to John or Hank and stroke their legs or lick their shoes because that is something else entirely.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IE1GsMCusrc&feature=g-upl&context=G2028a3dAUAAAAAAAAAA
There is a lot of puppy, so prepare for the adorable train. Also I didn’t notice until it was on YT that I accidently chopped too early at two points, so I’m sorry.

Okay so I liked this video. It’s about a guys spirit alter ego that goes off on an adventure around his house while the original guy just sits around without any ideas for a video, or really feeling like he wants to make one… I think the effects were really cool even though they were a little off at times, but I still thought it was ace! I would like to do a video like this at some point, but I don’t know how you do the whole split screen kind of thing. The best bits are when the guy is dancing around and stuff… I also noticed a copy of TFiOS in the background to one of the scenes which was nice and nerdfighter-ish! Overall I’d rate this video a 4/5! Keep up the good work whoever you are!

My video (I hope you like it): http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qT45SSndxak

Thanks and DFTBA!

Hey, just watched you video. As far as production goes, you’re doing pretty well. The video looked good, the background is neither too boring or too cluttered and your cuts are done well. However, I found the content kind of boring (don’t take it personally, I almost never enjoy hearing about other peoples’ dreams). The ending was a tad abrupt as well. It was good enough to make me watch some of your other videos though, which I enjoyed much more. I hope that wasn’t too harsh, I promise I’m not a mean person.

My video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_SlZoJuteGg

haha i really liked the video i found it very funny to watch

Here is my video i know it is not the best but there was a lot of work put into it

It is in two parts

Part one: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OjdvPa-Q3as

Part two: http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=iv&annotation_id=annotation_689008&src_vid=OjdvPa-Q3as&v=foaJx4uSmiE

You seem to be very passionate about this project which is amazing. Great video, you have a great camera presence, all that jazz, but mainly good luck with the movie. Based off of this video I think that you’ll do an awesome job with it and I’m so excited to see the final product.

My video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kiF5H0OEZKQ

HA I love the fact that you did very simple camera tricks to make this work. Kuudos, here is my TFiOS Preview
http://youtu.be/2nmaDHecyyY

I liked the creativity of the punishment and thought the montage was going to be a little boring, but it wasn’t. I do think you should have cut out that beginning section though, and just started out with a simple description of why you’re running around IKEA sitting in chairs. Nice song, btw. The cut right before the meatball clip was a little rough too. I enjoyed watching the video overall, but there was one question I had. How long did it take? You don’t mention it and it’s hard to get a sense of time with a montage.

Here’s my video. It’s my first actual review and I’m still trying to find my vlogging voice, but at least the lighting is better.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UqTcCgawRAw&feature=youtu.be

Oh yeah, and if you would be so kind as to recommend a movie for me to watch, I’d greatly appreciate it.
http://www.google.com/moderator/#16/e=1e8991

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I really enjoyed it! Work on looking at the camera more, and the split screen was really obvious, but other than that it was well prepared and well edited.

Um… I don’t know what this is, or if it will be understandable to anyone who’s not me, but:
http://youtu.be/KXKUx6GE1z8

I like it, good camera angles good composition, very interesting, it’s one of the better videos I have seen on youtube.

Film Adaptation of the First chapter of TFiOS I hope you enjoy pass it around if you like it
http://youtu.be/aH0jItgXGfc

Funny and random but i did like it

The first part of my Portal LP http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dQ2cDG-tuGw&feature=channel_video_title

haha that was fantastic drugs are indeed bad!

Gonna post it one more time
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aH0jItgXGfc

:3